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-# TM Tlon Messenger
+# Tlon Messenger (TM)
 
-Tlon Messenger is a new kind of messenger which you can fully control.
-User ID is your cryptographic property, while all your data is stored in a single
-file, yours to keep and yours to take. With TM, you own a distinct node on the
-network, which you can use to host a community, a blog, or run any other computation.
+Tlon Messenger is a new kind of messenger which you can fully control. The user ID is your cryptographic property, while all your data is stored in a single file, yours to keep and yours to take. With TM, you own a distinct node on the network, which you can use to host a community, a blog, or run any other computation. This repository contains the source code of the two main components of TM:
 
-This repository contains the source code of the two main components of TM:
-- TM app, which is available on iOS, Android and Desktop.
+- TM client, which is available on iOS, Android and Desktop
 - TM backend, which is deployed on the Urbit platform
 
-## TM App
+## Client
 
-TM App is written in React Native. The mobile version is available on iOS and Android,
-while desktop app is available on Linux, Mac and Windows.
+The client is written in React Native. The mobile version is available on iOS and Android, while the desktop version is available via browser (with a desktop app planned soon for macOS, Linux, and Windows).
 
-## TM Backend
+## Backend
 
-TM backend consists of a number of independent components, called
-_agents_.
+The TM backend consists of a number of independent components, called agents.
 
 ### %groups
-%groups allow creation of communities that aggregate distinct
-communication channels. Each group sets its own rules by defining user
-roles and the entry policy, and defines a set of channels available for
-groups members to subscribe to.
+
+%groups allows creation of communities that aggregate distinct communication channels. Each group sets its own rules by defining user roles and the entry policy, and defines a set of channels available for group members to subscribe to.
 
 ### %channels
-%channels facilitate communication between any number of parties by
-designating one node as the host. A channel can function as a group chat,
-a gallery or a notebook. Channels can be further customized with TM Hooks, which
-allow you to program custom behaviours triggered by various channel
-events.
+
+%channels facilitates communication between any number of parties by designating one node as the host. A channel can function as a group chat, a gallery or a notebook. Channels can be further customized with hooks, which allow you to program custom behaviours triggered by various channel events.
 
 ### %chat
-%chat is a direct-message agent, which, unlike %channels, establishes peer-to-peer connection
-between two parties.
+
+%chat is a direct-message agent, which, unlike %channels, establishes peer-to-peer connection between two parties.
 
 ### %contacts
-%contacts manage the user profile, and track connections to other
-users, constructing the user's social graph as he interacts with others
-on the TM network.
+%contacts manages the user profile ands track connections to other users, constructing the user's social graph as they interact with others on the network.
 
 ### %activity
-%activity is TM's activity tracker. It aggregates events sent
-by other agents and alerts the user based on his notification settings.
-
-### %profile
-%profile allows the user to expose a personal webpage accessible through
-his node's URL. The webpage can feature a preview of user's groups, or a
-widget registered by any other agent.
 
-### %expose
-%expose allows the user to publish the content available in one of the
-channels to the clearweb.
+%activity is TM's activity tracker. It aggregates events sent by other agents and alerts the user based on his notification settings.
 
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+### %profile
 
+%profile allows the user to expose a personal webpage accessible through their node's URL. The webpage can feature a preview of user's favorite groups or widgets registered by any other agents.
 
+### %expose
 
+%expose allows the user to publish the content available in one of the channels to the clearweb.